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2013-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.d 2.e 3.a 4.e 5.e The Korea is very hot now.And the monsoon is coming. So the humidity is high,and discomfort index is high. I don't like the heat.I want to eat Patbingsu.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Tom^^ Happy Wednesday! Time really flies fast! Oh! I envy you because the weather in my country is rainy.  I was able to see pictures of Patbingsu.^^ I think it\'s really delicious. We also have that here in the Philippines but it\'s a bit different. I hope to taste that someday. You did a pretty nice job with your homework, please go over the corrections I provided for you. If you have any questions, just ask me in class. I like summer season, how about you? See you in class!Teacher Nina1.d >> Correct! 2.e >> D3.a >> Correct!4.e >> B5.e>> DThe Korea is very hot now. >> Korea\'s weather is really hot. And the monsoon is coming. >> Monsoon season is coming.So the humidity is high,and discomfort index is high. >> Correct! OR >> The humidity level is high and the discomfort index level is also high.I don\'t like the heat. >> I don\'t like heat. OR >> I don\'t like hot weather. I want to eat Patbingsu.^^ >> Correct!

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