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2013-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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1. Could you please tell me (who/whom/whose) that was? -> whom 2. The men, two of (who/whom/whose) were drunk, walked very slowly. -> whom 3. The guy (who/whom/whose) computer I was using moved to Spain. -> whose 4. I know (who/whom/whose) did it. -> who 5. She didn't know when the ESL book was written, or by (who/whom/whose). -> whom I am interested in cooking. I learned some cooking methods in a cooking class a few years ago. At that time I practiced what I had learned at the cooking class. But I live alone so I hardly ever cook. I used to eat fast-foods at home. In Korea, Most people eat steamed rice, side dishes. I like to eat many side dishes but I don't have enough time for cooking. My health is getting worse because of poor nourishment. Nowadays, I am trying to cook although I eat alone.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework.. I am glad that nowadays you are cooking for yourself..It can really improve health, I think. Anyway, if you have questions regarding the corrections, please ask me in class.. T. Jennifer 1. Could you please tell me (who/whom/whose) that was? -> whom >> who [subject of the clause]2. The men, two of (who/whom/whose) were drunk, walked very slowly. -> whom >> Correct!3. The guy (who/whom/whose) computer I was using moved to Spain. -> whose >> Correct!4. I know (who/whom/whose) did it. -> who >> Correct!5. She didn\'t know when the ESL book was written, or by (who/whom/whose).-> whom>> Correct!I am interested in cooking. >> Correct!I learned some cooking methods in a cooking class a few years ago. >> Correct!At that time I practiced what I had learned at the cooking class. >> Correct!But I live alone so I hardly ever cook. >> Correct!I used to eat fast-foods at home. >> Correct!In Korea, Most people eat steamed rice, side dishes. >>In Korea, most people eat steamed rice and side dishes. I like to eat many side dishes but I don\'t have enough time for cooking. >>I like to eat many side dishes but I don\'t have enough time to cook. My health is getting worse because of poor nourishment. >> Correct!Nowadays, I am trying to cook although I eat alone. >> Correct!

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