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I answered No.5 question. I think the role of fortune tellers in korea society is for entertainment, because,it's fun to know about their future, although it's not to correct. Sometimes, it can be a good advice to people who have a problem,because though this, people who are inspired from fortune telling, start to find answer about thier problems. Once upon a time, a fortune telling was a superstition,however,it became a culture in korea for entertainment. And it will be continued as a culture which have many merits.

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