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2013-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.country 2.country 3.land 4.country 5.land 6.land I don't like Soviet Union. Before because that country is terrible. There was accident in Soviet Union. The KEl1001 airline flew from New York to Korea.There was a lot of Korean in KEL1001 airplane.The plane was holding its altitude at thirty thound feet. Suddenly the airplane was crashed because the Soviet shoot down.How awful! So I don't like the Soviet Union.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom^^ Happy Thursday! How are you? I hope that you ahd a fun day! Wow! You got a perfect score! I think the homework was easy for you, am I right? Keep up the good attitude. Awesome! You were able to compose good sentences today. Keep on wirting! Let us improve all of your skills in English! See you in class!Teacher Nina 1.country >> Correct! 2.country >> Correct! 3.land >> Correct! 4.country >> Correct! 5.land >> Correct! 6.land>> Correct! I don\'t like Soviet Union. Before because that country is terrible. >> I don\'t like Soviet Union before because that country was terrible.There was accident in Soviet Union. >> There was an accident in the the Soviet Union. The KEl1001 airline flew from New York to Korea. >> Correct! There was a lot of Korean in KEL1001 airplane. >> Correct! The plane was holding its altitude at thirty thound feet. >> The plane was holding its altitude at thirty thousand feet.Suddenly the airplane was crashed because the Soviet shoot down. >> Suddenly the airplane crashed because the Soviet shoot down. How awful! So I don\'t like the Soviet Union. >> Correct!

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