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I want to back that day when is College Scholastic Ability Test. I know it's an important day not only Koreans but all students regardless of their countries. If we want to go to famous school, we must get a good grade. When I was young, I thought that if people have capacity even it whatever, people can succeed by himself. But, I was wrong and finally I know it's impossible specially, in Korea. To have school relation is very important for success. Because their seniors can be followed in companies, government, some special organizations. For example, Seoul National University's graduate, best school in Korea, had been worked in major conglomerates of higt position in goverment etc. When they need new employees, they will contact their school's [이름]iors. So, if I back just one day, I will choose test day and I try to best to get good grade.

Hi there^-^ I\'m pretty sure this was memorable to you that\'s why you chose it. Maybe because it had great impact to what you are right now. Anyway, I like the way you presented your ideas. It\'s very organized. Please just go over the corrections below. Enjoy your day :) Teacher Jeny   Here are my corrections: I want to back that day when is College Scholastic Ability Test. >>I want to go back to that day when it was College Scholastic Ability Test. I know it\'s an important day not only Koreans but all students regardless of their countries. >>I know it was an important day not only for Koreans but also for all students regarless of their countries. If we want to go to famous school, we must get a good grade. >>Correct :) When I was young, I thought that if people have capacity even it whatever, people can succeed by himself. >>When I was young, I thought that if people have the capacity,whatever happens people can succeed by himself. But, I was wrong and finally I know it\'s impossible specially in Korea. >>Correct :) To have school relation is very important for success. >>Correct :) Because their seniors can be followed in companies, government, some special organizations. >>Because theirs seniors can be allowed to work in companies, government and some special organizations. For example, Seoul National University\'s graduate, best school in Korea, had been worked in major conglomerates of higt position in goverment etc. >>For example, Seoul National University graduates, best school in Korea had worked in conglomeration with high position in the government. When they need new employees, they will contact their school\'s [이름]iors. >>When they need new employees, they will just contact their school [이름]iors. So, if I back just one day, I will choose test day and I try to best to get good grade. >>So, if I go back to just one day, I will choose the test day and I\'ll try my best to get good grade.