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People who live in the past don't seem to tend to need advanced techonology such as computer and cellphone because they only made a living with agriculture. However, nowadays people can have these things and enjoy using them even though they don’t enjoy chatting with their friends and It makes people feel phycological distance. As time goes by, we can not help using modern technology. I altogether agree with idea that we cannot have both technology advance and traditional cultures. Even if there are some artifact we kept and some people want to keep their culture and customs, Most of the people will forget about traditional cultures. Frankly, even,children don't know history and art. To make matters worse, They don't try to know tradition and hate it. They only would like to listen contemporary music such as k-pop. acordingly, It is very difficult to maintain past things. In conclusion it seems to be impossible to have these things concurrently.

Good evening Ted! Thank you for sending your homework today. This composition is really really great. This is the best so far! It is very impressive. You have given me a complete essay with an amazing idea. I hope that you continue challenging yourself and make even better compositions. I know you can do it. Again! what a great job! Anyways, I want to say sorry for missing out on our class today. I hope you had a great time. See you! Have a good night! Sweet dreams.   Always, ~T.Aimee^^   People who live in the past don\'t seem to tend to need advanced techonology such as computer and cellphone because they only made a living with agriculture. >>People who lived in the past don\'t seem to need advance technology such as computer and cellphones. It is because they only made a living from agriculture.  However, nowadays people can have these things and enjoy using them even though they don’t enjoy chatting with their friends and It makes people feel phycological distance. >> Correct (an amazing sentence!!!) As time goes by, we can not help using modern technology. >> Correct >> As time goes by, we cannot avoid using these modern technologies.I altogether agree with idea that we cannot have both technology advance and traditional cultures. >> I agree with the idea that we cannot mix together advance technology and traditional cultures.  Even if there are some artifact we kept and some people want to keep their culture and customs, Most of the people will forget about traditional cultures. >> Even if there are some who keep artifacts and practice their customs and trditions, most people have already forgotten about these things.Frankly, even,children don\'t know history and art. >> Correct >> Frankly speaking, children these days are not aware of their own history.  To make matters worse, They don\'t try to know tradition and hate it. >> To make matters worse, they don\'t try to learn about these traditions and even hate know it.  They only would like to listen contemporary music such as k-pop. acordingly, It is very difficult to maintain past things. >> They only like to listen to contemporary music such as k-pop. In reality, it is really difficult to maintain these customs.In conclusion it seems to be impossible to have these things concurrently. >> Correct >> In conclusion, it seems to be impossible to have thse things together.