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The person I admire the most is my mom. In the old days, I admired the historical great persons that are well known by many people. For example, I admired the King Sejong and the General Lee Sunsin. But as I am getting older I became to admire my mom the most. My mom has raised five offsprings including me. My family was poor and had very difficult times. But she always has done the best. So my siblings and I are very good. And my mom has taken care of my four nephews and one niece. Babysitting is very difficult but she did that with love and sincerity. Also, She has helped neighbors in hard time. I respect my mom and I love her. I could not live like her.

Hello, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for submitting an essay on our page. Wow! with your description, I can feel how much you love and admire your mom. I think it is only right that our parents be our role models.. Good night! T. Jennifer The person I admire the most is my mom. >> Correct!In the old days, I admired the historical great persons that are well known by many people. >> Correct!For example, I admired the King Sejong and the General Lee Sunsin. >>For example, I admired King Sejong and General Lee Sunsin.But as I am getting older I became to admire my mom the most. >>But as I am getting older I came to admire my mom the most.My mom has raised five offsprings including me. >> Correct!My family was poor and had very difficult times. >> Correct!But she always has done the best. >> Correct!So my siblings and I are very good. >> Correct!And my mom has taken care of my four nephews and one niece. >> Correct!Babysitting is very difficult but she did that with love and sincerity. >> Correct!Also, She has helped neighbors in hard time. >>Also, she has helped neighbors in hard times.I respect my mom and I love her. >> Correct!I could not live like her. >> I can\'t live like her. OR:>> It is difficult to follow in her steps.