Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a college student, I had a difficult time to satisfy my professor of obduracy.
He was young unlike other professors.
He just became a proffesor at that time.
He was very energetic and gave me many requirements.
I did not all of the homeworks because of sickness.
But he did not consider any difficult situation.
He was a man of obduracy.
I did not want put anything in the way of him.
I didn't like him at first.
But I knew that he had warm mind so I liked his way of teaching.
Thanks to his obduracy, I studied very hard and I got a good reward.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! We all have this kind of teacher once in our lives..I can relate well with your story..Anyway, enjoy your weekend and I hope you can have real bonding time with your mom.. Talk to you again on Monday..^^
T. Jennifer
When I was a college student, I had a difficult time to satisfy my professor of obduracy.
>> When I was a college student, I had a difficult time satisfying my professor of obduracy.He was young unlike other professors.
>> Correct!He just became a proffesor at that time.
>> Correct!He was very energetic and gave me many requirements.
>> Correct!I did not all of the homeworks because of sickness.
>>I was not able to do all my homework because of sickness.But he did not consider any difficult situation.
>> Correct!He was a man of obduracy.
>> Correct!I did not want put anything in the way of him.
>> Correct!I didn\'t like him at first.
>> Correct!But I knew that he had warm mind so I liked his way of teaching.
>>But I knew that he had a warm heart so I liked his way of teaching.Thanks to his obduracy, I studied very hard and I got a good reward.
>> Correct!
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