homework

2013-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1) on TV often watch sport I I often watch on TV 2) my father in the garden in the afternoon is usually In the afternoon, my father is usually in the garden 3) she lives in Mexico 4) is he reading worksheet the He is reading the worksheet 5) sleeps never in my bed our cat Our cat never sleeps in my bed 6) window now opening is the Lisa Lisa is now opening the window 7) to school we take always the bus We always take the bus to school 8) on the sitting the grandparents sofa are Grandparents are sitting on the sofa 9) after to I breakfast school go I go to school after breakfast 10) seldom Andy comes 9 pm home before Andy seldom comes 9pm home before

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!!     Happy Monday. I am glad you were able to make your assignment. Good job. You did well.^^Always remember to use a capital letter when you begin your sentence and never forget to put a period at the end of every sentence. See you on our nex class^^ ~T. Jeny~ 1) on TV often watch sport I I often watch on TV >> I often watch sport on TV.2) my father in the garden in the afternoon is usually In the afternoon, my father is usually in the garden>> Correct or >> My father is usually in the garden in the afternoon.3) she lives in Mexico >> Correct4) is he reading worksheet the He is reading the worksheet>> Correct5) sleeps never in my bed our cat Our cat never sleeps in my bed>> Correct6) window now opening is the Lisa Lisa is now opening the window>> Correct7) to school we take always the bus We always take the bus to school>> Correct8) on the sitting the grandparents sofa are Grandparents are sitting on the sofa>>The grandparents are sitting on the sofa.9) after to I breakfast school go I go to school after breakfast>> Correct10) seldom Andy comes 9 pm home before Andy seldom comes 9pm home before >> Andy seldom comes home before 9 pm.

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