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Educated people directly teach for students so, they have to responsibilities for their actions and speech because students can follow educated people's mind and actions. They should teach what is right things and how to do live in life. Also, they must have true historical knowledge. History is crucial not only past and today but future. We have learned many terrible happening that war and natural disasters from history and try to do not same mistakes and prepare the methods disasters. Finally, educated people try to teach how to relationship with friends or co-workers. Human beings is social and we can't live alone that means we must have relationship with someone. It is most important than study in our life.

Hi there^^     Wow!!! What a great composition you made today. It is very well said. Educated people must become a role model to society. I have made a few corrections in your essay. Please inform me during our class if my ideas and corrections are different from what you mean. See you soon. Take care. ~T. Jeny~   Educated people directly teach for students so, they have to responsibilities for their actions and speech because students can follow educated people\'s mind and actions. >> Educated people directly teach students so they are responsible for their actions and speech because students follow educated people\'s words and actions. They should teach what is right things and how to do live in life. >> They should teach the right things and how to live a life.Also, they must have true historical knowledge. >> Correct >>or Also,  they must have a background on history. History is crucial not only past and today but future. >> History is crucial. We need to know not only the past and the present but we also need to see the future. We have learned many terrible happening that war and natural disasters from history and try to do not same mistakes and prepare the methods disasters. >> We have learned about many terrible things which happend during the war and natural disasters which struck us during the past. Lets try not to do the same mistakes and prepare ourselves against any disaster.Finally, educated people try to teach how to relationship with friends or co-workers. >> Finally, educated people should try to teach how to have a good relationship with friends or co-workers. Human beings is social and we can\'t live alone that means we must have relationship with someone. >> Human beings are social beings. We can\'t live alone so we must to have a relationship with someone. It is most important than study in our life. >> It is the most important aspect in our life.