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Hello there! Happy Tuesday!^^
I have to thank you for sending this in.
I am truly happy because you allotted some time to complete this one.
For your questions, in case there are, I will gladly answer them in class.
Enjoy your lunch! See you.^^
Creative Writing: What are the best and the most useful inventions of the mankind in the 20th and 21st centuries?
I Think \'internet\' is the most useful inventions of the mankind in the 20th and 21st centuries.
because the internet makes our life to comportable.
>>I think the \"INTERNET\" is the most useful invention of mankind in the 20th and 21st centuries because it makes our life more [comfortable].
for example, internet banking, internet shopping.
>>For example, we can do Internet banking and shopping.^^
now internet will be very important our life.
>>Now, the Internet is very important in our lives/to us.
>>The Internet will be very important in our lives/to us.
i have to go eating lunch ^_^
>>I have to go eat my lunch.^^
>> I have to go now because I have to eat lunch.^^
see you soon~^^)/
>>Correct! [later]^^
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