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Hi there(^^)
It sounds really fun. That is a great way of spending a day if given the chance.
Lets wish that one day it would come true. Thank you for making your homework.
I also hope that you had a fun time making your composition.
See you in class. Take care.
~T.Jeny~
If you had a day to spend as you wish, how would you use your time?
If I had a day to spend as I wish, I definitely travel some countries I\'ve never been, such as Italy, Spain or Turkey.
>> Correct
I would definitely travel to some countries.....
The day I spend as I wish feel like I don\'t need to worry about money so that I could choose my day to travel somewhere.
>> On that day, I feel like I don\'t need to worry about money so I could just choose to travel somewhere.
I\'ve just been to UK, Belgium and France about 2 weeks ago, and after that my feeling to travel gets stronger.
>> Correct or
>> I\'ve just been to UK, Belgium and France about 2 weeks ago, and after that my feeling to travel got stronger.
On the day, I want to travel tourist attractions first, and then I want to relax my time at a cafe with coffee and book feeling the countries life.
>> I want to visit some tourist attractions first, then I want to relax and spend my time at a cafe with a coffee and a book. I want to feel the country\'s life.
At night, I might go to the bar or club ! Isn\'t it sound fun ? hehe
>> Correct
>> Does it sound fun? hehe^^
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