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I had two vacation. When I was in 4grade,I went to the Keung-Ju. This is called old city in Keung Ju.That mean is that city is very old. I see the old temple called "Bul-Kuk-Sa"and I see the old buddha statue. And When I was in 5grade I went to Yeu-Su.There is ocean city. There was a lot of island and bridge.The "Lee-sun -Sin"bridge is the longest bridge in Yeu-Su.

Hi there my dearest Tom^^ Wow! Long time no see! Thank you for sharing a great story to me. I really enjoyed reading it. You composed good sentences! Keep it up! I am sure that you really had an awesome time. I hope that for your next vacation, you will be able to visit the Philippines too. I hope to visit those places too. We can talk more about this in class. How are you? I am really excited to talk to you.^^ Don\'t forget to eat your dinner. See you! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: I had two vacation. >> I had two vacations. >> OR: I had two great vacations.When I was in 4grade,I went to the Keung-Ju. >> When I was in fourth grade, I went to Keung-Ju.This is called old city in Keung Ju. >> This is called the old city in Keung Ju. That mean is that city is very old. >> It means that the city is very old.I see the old temple called \"Bul-Kuk-Sa\"and I see the old buddha statue. >> I saw the old temple called \"Bul-Kuk-Sa\" and also the buddha statue.And When I was in 5grade I went to Yeu-Su. >> And when I was in fifth grade, I went to Yeu-Su. There is ocean city. >> There is an ocean city in that place.There was a lot of island and bridge. >> There were a lot of islands and bridges. The \"Lee-sun -Sin\"bridge is the longest bridge in Yeu-Su. >> \"Lee-sun -Sin\" is the longest bridge in Yeu-Su.