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학생이 쓴 원문
People in Korea usually eat vegetable pancake in rainy days.
Most ingedients of Korean pancake are kimchi, scallion and young pumpkin.
When I cooked a dish for my boyfriend for the first time, my boyfriend reacted very exaggerately.
At that time, It was drizzing so I cooked vegetable pancake with kimchi and chives.
We ate it very deliciously.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms, Eun Young! Thank you for sharing your experience with me. I guess you can really cook a nice pan of it because of how you described it. I can imagine why people love eating it on a rainy day. I guess it is like eating \"pandesal\". This is a kind of bread that we especially like during rainy days.. Good day for tomorrow!
T. Jennifer
People in Korea usually eat vegetable pancake in rainy days.
>>Correct!
Most ingedients of Korean pancake are kimchi, scallion and young pumpkin.
>>Correct!
When I cooked a dish for my boyfriend for the first time, my boyfriend reacted very exaggerately.
>>When I cooked a dish for my boyfriend for the first time, my boyfriend reacted very exaggeratedly.
At that time, It was drizzing so I cooked vegetable pancake with kimchi and chives.
>>At that time, It was drizzling so I cooked vegetable pancake with kimchi and chives.
We ate it very deliciously.
>>Correct!
OR:>> We ate it with gusto.
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