Homework

Essay: If an out-of-town visitor was coming to visit, where would you take your visitor? Describe the best places around your town and why they are so interesting. Maria~!! Yesterday, you seemed to be shocked. Because I live in Jeju island in Korea. yeah~ Jeju island is small. but It has everything I need. my town is placed in north in jeju. there is sea in one side of my town. and there is air port. So from morning to evening I can see air planes flying in the sky too many times. If you visit my town, I want to recommend to go to "Yongduyam". it is rock which resemble dragon's head. but it is also my town's best place. Because Seeing the "Yongduyam", you can see big sea. The sea is very large and has beautiful scene. so now it is miserable to see "Yongduyam" without neck. Several years ago, fierce typoon cuts "Yongduyam" so its neck was breaked. However it is still beautifull. oh i can't write more. ㅜㅜ See you soon later~!!!

Hi there!
Thank you for sending this in.^^
Well, they say that bad news travel fast.
But good news travel fast as well.
And for today, I think I have a good news for you.
You did a pretty good job here!^^
Keep it up!
Have a great day!^^

T. Maria^^

 Essay: If an out-of-town visitor was coming to visit, where would you take your visitor? Describe the best places around your town and why they are so interesting. 
Maria~!! 

>> Correct
Yesterday, you seemed to be shocked.

>> Yesterday, you seemed shocked!^^

Because I live in Jeju island in Korea.

>> Is it because I live in Jeju Island, Korea?
yeah~ Jeju island is small. but It has everything I need.

>> Correct
my town is placed in north in jeju.

>> My town is located at the north part of Jeju.

 there is sea in one side of my town. and there is air port.

>> You can see the sea on the other side of the town and also, there\'s a port.

 So from morning to evening I can see air planes flying in the sky too many times.

>> Correct

If you visit my town, I want to recommend to go to \"Yongduyam\".

>> If you visit my town, I would recommend that you go to \"Yongduyam\"

it is rock which resemble dragon\'s head. but it is also my town\'s best place.

>> It is a rock that resembles a dragon and this is the town\'s best place.

Because Seeing the \"Yongduyam\", you can see big sea.

>> If you see the \"Yongduyam\", you can also see the ocean.

The sea is very large and has beautiful scene.

>> The sea is very beautiful - a beautiful scene!^^

so now it is miserable to see \"Yongduyam\" without neck.

>> But now, it is very sad to see \"Yongduyam\" without a neck.

Several years ago, fierce typoon cuts \"Yongduyam\" so its neck was breaked.

>> Several years ago, a typhoon hit the island that is why the Yongduyam\'s neck broke.

 However it is still beautifull. oh i can\'t write more.

>> Correct^^ [beautiful] [the space is limited ;(]

ㅜㅜ See you soon later~!!!

>> Correct^^