homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Jeny :>
I'm so sorry for the absent today.
I just got the part time job and I couldn't use my cell phone during the job. After the job, I knew you called me a lot. Sorry :'(
Moreover, due to the part time job, I couldn't run my class with you T_T sad...
It was good to know you in the class :)
Yeb, I will start my homework then !
Select three adjectives that describe you and explain
1. optimistic : My parents always say that do not be angry easily, and see all the things positively. And it goes my mind naturally.
2. speedy : In Korea, there is a rumor that depending on the region where they're born,they have different personality like people who were born in Kyeongsang-do, my hometown, they are more impetuous and do the things fast.
3. smiling : On today's first work, the manager gave me a lot of things to do, but I didn't change my face and be smile !
강사 첨삭
Hi^^
I called you awhile ago but I guess you are not available.
It\'s good to know that you\'re fine and nothing bad happened.
Congratulations for having a part time job.^^
I wish you all the best and goodluck to your new career.^^
Thank you for doing your homework by the way.
You did a good job.:))
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow then. See you!!!]
~T.Jeny~
Hello, Jeny :>
>>Hello Jeny,I\'m so sorry for the absent today.
>>I\'m sorry for being absent today.I just got the part time job and I couldn\'t use my cell phone during the job. After the job, I knew you called me a lot. Sorry :\'(>>I just got a part time job and I couldn\'t use my cellphone while working. After working, I found out that you called me
a lot. Sorry. :(
Moreover, due to the part time job, I couldn\'t run my class with you T_T sad...>>Moreover, due to my part time job I coudn\'t run my class with you. T_T
**YOU MEAN:Moreover, due to my part time job I will not be able to continue having classes with you.It was good to know you in the class :)>>It was good knowing you in class. :)
Yeb, I will start my homework then ! >>Yes, I will start doing my homework then.
Select three adjectives that describe you and explain1. optimistic : My parents always say that do not be angry easily, and see all the things positively. And it goes my mind naturally.>>My parents would always tell me not to get angry easily and I should see things positively. Then it goes my mind naturally.
2. speedy : In Korea, there is a rumor that depending on the region where they\'re born,they have different personality like people who were born in Kyeongsang-do, my hometown, they are more impetuous and do the things fast. >>YOU MEAN: In Korea, there\'s a saying in every region. Everyone has different personalities. Let\'s say in Kyeongsang-do,my hometown,people are more impetuous and they do things so fast.
3. smiling : On today\'s first work, the manager gave me a lot of things to do, but I didn\'t change my face and be smile !
>>On today\'s first work/TASK,the manager gave me a lot of things to do but I didn\'t change the expression of my face, I just smiled.
OR: On my first day at work, my manager gave me a lot of things to do but I didn\'t change my facial expression and smiled all day.
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