homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.butter
2.address
3.biscuit
4.tie
5.sugar
The summer vacation is coming
I'm so excited.
I imagine what I do for the great vacation.
I will have fun,I will go to the camp,I will sleep all day long.
Also I will study hard for the next semester.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Tom^^
One more day to go and it will be your favorite day. I am sure that you are looking forward to play with your friends this weekend. You almost got a perfect score! Great! I am really happy that you are doing your best everyday. Please go over the corrections I gave you. I am sure that you will have a great vacation. Let\'s talk more about your plans in class. See you later!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.butter
>> Correct!2.address
>> Correct!3.biscuit
>> cookies 4.tie
>> Correct!5.sugar>> Correct!The summer vacation is coming
>> Summer vacation is coming. I\'m so excited.
>> Correct!I imagine what I do for the great vacation.
>> I am imagining what will I do to have a great vacation.
>> OR: I am imagine what activities I will do to have a great vacation. I will have fun,I will go to the camp,I will sleep all day long.
>> Correct!Also I will study hard for the next semester.
>> And also I will study for the next semester.
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