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2013-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.butter 2.address 3.biscuit 4.tie 5.sugar The summer vacation is coming I'm so excited. I imagine what I do for the great vacation. I will have fun,I will go to the camp,I will sleep all day long. Also I will study hard for the next semester.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Tom^^ One more day to go and it will be your favorite day. I am sure that you are looking forward to play with your friends this weekend. You almost got a perfect score!  Great! I am really happy that you are doing your best everyday. Please go over the corrections I gave you. I am sure that you will have a great vacation. Let\'s talk more about your plans in class. See you later! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.butter >> Correct!2.address >> Correct!3.biscuit >> cookies 4.tie >> Correct!5.sugar>> Correct!The summer vacation is coming >> Summer vacation is coming. I\'m so excited. >> Correct!I imagine what I do for the great vacation. >> I am imagining what will I do to have a great vacation. >> OR: I am imagine what activities I will do to have a great vacation. I will have fun,I will go to the camp,I will sleep all day long. >> Correct!Also I will study hard for the next semester. >> And also I will study for the next semester.

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