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I took an english test today, after arriving at home, I checked answers by internet class, as I expected, I got a bad result, I really disappointed my result, and especailly I changed several answers before submitting my answer sheet,it was my terrible mistake,because my former answers were right, other wise my new answers were wrong, I've done really stupid action. It's so regrettable. So I want to predict my good result from next test, because I don't know korea's predictions and I'm not interested that^^;, I'm just wordering my future.
Anyway, I hope, I'll have lots of good luck.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Oh, I feel bad hearing about what happened to your test. Why did you change your answers? You should’ve trusted your instincts! ^__^ Anyway, like you said, better luck next time. Never give up. Don’t stop trying. I know you can do it. Just learn from your mistakes for now. Have a good day!
By the way, use proper punctuation marks when you write a composition. You use a period (.) to indicate the end of your sentence and a comma (,) to indicate a pause or division in your sentence. Please remember that.
I took an english test today,
>> correct
**Capitalize the word English.
after arriving at home, I checked answers by internet class,
>> After arriving home, I checked my answers on the internet.
as I expected, I got a bad result, I really disappointed my result,
>> As expected, I got bad results and I was really disappointed.
and especailly I changed several answers before submitting my answer sheet,
>> Especially because I changed several answers before I submitted my answer sheet.
it was my terrible mistake,because my former answers were right, other wise my new answers were wrong,
>> It was a terrible mistake because my former answers were already right but my new answers were wrong.
I've done really stupid action.
>> What I’ve done was really stupid.
>>> I did something stupid.
It's so regrettable.
>> correct
>> I regretted it. -- better
So I want to predict my good result from next test, because I don't know korea's predictions and I'm not interested that^^;,
>> So I want to make a prediction about the results of my next test, but I don’t know anything about Korean predictions and I’m not interested in that.
I'm just wordering my future.
>> I’m just wondering about my future.
Anyway, I hope, I'll have lots of good luck.
>> Anyway, I hope I will have lots of luck.
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