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2013-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Hi, T.Glenda! These days, I am tired because the weather is hot. i take care of yourself. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Time Capsule What would you want the people in the year 2200 to know about life on Earth right now? The people would listen to unknown story about memory of the past. old story have historicity. What objects best represent who we are as people, our accomplishments, our joys and sorrows? it is time. Everything is included in the time.

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Hello! A wonderful day to you! Thank you very much for doing your homework. You did a good job,however I expected more from you.^^ I hope you could make it up on your coming up homeworks.^^ kkkkk Keep up being witty and clever.   Have a nice day! Take care too and smile all the time.^^   ~T.Glenda~   Hi, T.Glenda!>>Correct **OR (Formal):Hi T.Glenda,These days, I am tired because the weather is hot.>>Correcti take care of yourself.>>I take good care of myself. >>YOU MEAN: Take good care of yourself.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Time CapsuleWhat would you want the people in the year 2200 to know about life on Earth right now?The people would listen to unknown story about memory of the past.>>The people would listen to stories and memories of the past.old story have historicity. >>Old stories are historical.What objects best represent who we are as people, our accomplishments, our joys and sorrows?it is time. >>It is the time.  Everything is included in the time. >>OR SIMPLY: Everything that were included at that time. 

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