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ESSAY: Based on your own experiences and observations, use examples to show that you agree or disagree with the saying "You don't know what you've got till it's gone." Yeah!!~ I agree. because most of people don't know preciousness about something. it is very familiar to them. But I exprienced that it was important To me, it(something precious) is health. I suffered from serious ear infection two years ago. At the time, I was insensitive. so even, I didn't know my ear's pain. I almost lost my hearing. suffering from ear infection, I underwent many difficulties. I couldn't hear well. so I felt uneasy. and even I screwed up English listening exam. I was so painful during the treatment. so I thought that health was more important than other things. and I appreciated the fact that I was not deaf. After this episode, I appreciate the simple things in life.

Hi there^^     What a very meaningful composition. We really have to value the simple things we have in our life before it\'s too late. I am glad to know that you were able to overcome your sickness. Thank goodness!!! You did good in your writing. I just removed or added a few words to make it better. See you later!!!^^ ~T.Maria~   ESSAY: Based on your own experiences and observations, use examples to show that you agree or disagree with the saying \"You don\'t know what you\'ve got till it\'s gone.\"Yeah!!~ I agree. >> CORRECTbecause most of people don\'t know preciousness about something. it is very familiar to them. >> I agree because most people don\'t know how to value something.But I exprienced that it was important To me, it(something precious) is health. >> Based from my experience, my health is something precious to me.I suffered from serious ear infection two years ago. >> CORRECT >> I suffered from a serious ear infection two years ago. At the time, I was insensitive. so even, I didn\'t know my ear\'s pain. >> At that time, I was insensitive. Even I didn\'t know of my ear\'s pain.  I almost lost my hearing. >> CORRECT suffering from ear infection, I underwent many difficulties. >> CORRECT (use a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence) I couldn\'t hear well. so I felt uneasy. and even I screwed up English listening exam. >> I couldn\'t hear well, so I felt uneasy and  I even screwed up the English listening exam. I was so painful during the treatment. so I thought that health was more important than other things. >> I was in so much pain during the treatment, so I thought that health was more important than other things. and I appreciated the fact that I was not deaf. >> I also appreciated the fact that I did not become deaf. After this episode, I appreciate the simple things in life. >> CORRECT                   >>appreciated