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What is your motivation to study English?
In Korea, if you get a job, the most important and basic things that you have is language skill especially english. So that's why I've been to the U.S for improving my english, and it helped. And also I want to work for international company and english is needed for sure.
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What is your motivation to study English?In Korea, if you get a job, the most important and basic things that you have is language skill especially english.
>> In Korea, if you\'re applying for a job, the most important and basic thing that you have to have is the language skill especially in English.
So that\'s why I\'ve been to the U.S for improving my english, and it helped.
>> That\'s why I\'ve been to the U.S to improve my english, and it helped.
And also I want to work for international company and english is needed for sure.
>> And also I want to work for an international company so English is needed for sure.
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