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2013-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.brothers. 2.wearing. 3.be start 4.covers 5.finished Today,my friends visited my home.and still,they are here. these friends are my best friends. one of them,is very kind. and one of them is very funny.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dearest TOM^^ Happy Monday! A brand new week for us to be better. How was your day? Thank you for sending this in .^^ I was surprised that the homework you did was today. Nice! I am sure that you are having a great time with your friends now. Are they going to stay there overnight? I suddenly miss my friends. Please go over the corrections I gave you. if you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you! Teacher Nina 1.brothers. >> Correct! 2.wearing. >> Correct! 3.be start >> start on 4.covers >> birds 5.finished>> covered it Today,my friends visited my home.and still,they are here. >> Today, my friends went to my house and they are still here. >> OR: My friends came to my house and they are still here.these friends are my best friends. >> They are my best friends.one of them,is very kind. >> Correct! (Check: Capitalization^^)and one of them is very funny. >> Correct! (Check: Capitalization^^)

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