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2013-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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In my opinion, the knowledge which is gained from experience more valuable than the knowledge gained from the books. Because everyone can see and know the knowledge from books. However gaining form experience is only mine. Gaining knowledge from books is easy, even though the depth of books' knowledge is deeper than experience. So, I think action and learning from experience are more valuable.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! I really appreciate your time in doing your homework. ^_^ I definitely agree with your opinion because our best teacher is our experiences. As they say, who you are right now is the product of who you were in the past. No can tell you what you have learned from your own experiences but you alone. Have a magnificent day ahead! -T. Glenda- In my opinion, the knowledge which is gained from experience more valuable than the knowledge gained from the books. >> CORRECT! >> ( In my opinion, the knowledge which is gained from experience is more valuable than the knowledge gained from the books. ) Because everyone can see and know the knowledge from books. >> CORRECT! >> Or  Because everyone can see and know anything written on a book.However gaining form experience is only mine. >> CORRECT! >> Or However gaining knowledge from experience is a personal. Gaining knowledge from books is easy, even though the depth of books\' knowledge is deeper than experience. >> CORRECT!So, I think action and learning from experience are more valuable. >> CORRECT!

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