Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
A. In my opinion, the knowledge gained from my own experience is more important than that gained from books. Own experience is not forgotten easily and makes you realize many things in your life.
However, reading books and learning from books are also important since own experience is limited in your life. So, I'd like to recommend you that get much indirect experiences from books as possible as you can.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Good Morning! ^_^
Good job on this homework. I like your ideas and all of your sentences are correct!
I hope to see more of these good thoughts.
-T. Glenda-
Q. It has been said, \"Not everything that is learned is contained in books.\" Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? A.
In my opinion, the knowledge gained from my own experience is more important than that gained from books.
>> CORRECT! :)
Own experience is not forgotten easily and makes you realize many things in your life.
>> CORRECT! :)However, reading books and learning from books are also important since own experience is limited in your life.
>> CORRECT! :)
So, I\'d like to recommend you that get much indirect experiences from books as possible as you can.
>> CORRECT! :)
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.