Homework 33

2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Do you think you can be a better parent than your own parents in future? Give some examples I think i cannot foresee my future easily to be a better parent. because my parents have a lot of strong point to us. For example, my father had a nice manner and made us to have a various experience and knowledge through the travel. And my mom always effort to us through a healthy food. So it will be difficult things to serve future's child like my parents well.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun! I am so impressed with you! You did very good thank you so much... I hope you will keep up the good work...:) Take care always and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Do you think you can be a better parent than your own parents in future? Give some examplesI think i cannot foresee my future easily to be a better parent. >>correct because my parents have a lot of strong point to us. >>Because my parents show us a lot of strong points. For example, my father had a nice manner and made us to have a various experience and knowledge through the travel. >>For example, my father had a good manner and made us to have a various experience and knowledge by traveling. And my mom always effort to us through a healthy food. >>And my mom alaways makes us healthy food. So it will be difficult things to serve future\'s child like my parents well. >>So it will be difficult to serve the child\'s future like what my parents did.

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