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2013-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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hahaha I just listened the record and I laughed a lot!! Now I know why you said that. Haha ~~ Can you describe a perfect weekend for you? -> For me, a perfect and excellent weekend depends on how I spend weekdays. Because if I spend my weekdays with hard work, I want to spend my weekend with relax in my house. But if I spend my weekdays in my house a lot, I want to hang out with my friends !

강사 첨삭

Hello there! :)   Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework and thank you for being always active in class! Continue being hard working and you achieve your goals someday. :)   T. Kristel ^^   hahaha>>Hahaha!I just listened the record and I laughed a lot!! >>I just listened to the recording and I laughed a lot!Now I know why you said that. Haha ~~>>Correct!Can you describe a perfect weekend for you?>>Correct!-> For me, a perfect and excellent weekend depends on how I spend weekdays. >>Correct! Because if I spend my weekdays with hard work, I want to spend my weekend with relax in my house. >>Because if I spent my weekdays with hardwork, I would like to spend my weekend feeling relaxed in my house. But if I spend my weekdays in my house a lot, I want to hang out with my friends ! >>But if I spent a lot of my weekdays in my house , I want to hang out with my friends.

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