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hahaha
I just listened the record and I laughed a lot!!
Now I know why you said that. Haha ~~
Can you describe a perfect weekend for you?
-> For me, a perfect and excellent weekend depends on how I spend weekdays. Because if I spend my weekdays with hard work, I want to spend my weekend with relax in my house. But if I spend my weekdays in my house a lot, I want to hang out with my friends !
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Hello there! :)
Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework and thank you for being always active in class!
Continue being hard working and you achieve your goals someday. :)
T. Kristel ^^
hahaha>>Hahaha!I just listened the record and I laughed a lot!!
>>I just listened to the recording and I laughed a lot!Now I know why you said that. Haha ~~>>Correct!Can you describe a perfect weekend for you?>>Correct!-> For me, a perfect and excellent weekend depends on how I spend weekdays.
>>Correct!
Because if I spend my weekdays with hard work, I want to spend my weekend with relax in my house.
>>Because if I spent my weekdays with hardwork, I would like to spend my weekend feeling relaxed in my house.
But if I spend my weekdays in my house a lot, I want to hang out with my friends !
>>But if I spent a lot of my weekdays in my house , I want to hang out with my friends.
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