homework ~
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How many children would you like to have? Explain why.
-> I would like to have 2 children. Because only one looks lonely and they could become more greedy than a child with siblings. So, I think I have to make children at least 2 children, but over 2 children like 3 or 4 sounds too many for me. Haha. And also I have to spend much money on raising my children. So, if I have 3 or 4 children, it's gonna be hard to raise .. LOL
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Good evening^^. Good job in this composition. I can see how you expressed your thoughts well.
Keep it up and just be guided with your sentence structure. See you in class!
Teacher Kristel
How many children would you like to have? Explain why.-> I would like to have 2 children.
>> Correct
Because only one looks lonely and they could become more greedy than a child with siblings.
>>Because if I only have one baby the he or she might feel loneliness and become greedy for being an only child.
So, I think I have to make children at least 2 children, but over 2 children like 3 or 4 sounds too many for me.
>>That\'s the reason why I want to have just 2 children. Over 2 like having 3 or 4 children sounds many for me.
Haha. And also I have to spend much money on raising my children.
>>Correct
So, if I have 3 or 4 children, it\'s gonna be hard to raise .. LOL
>>Correct
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