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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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T. Chelsea
If one song were to describe your life, what song would it be?WHY?
>> Correct
I am sorry, I don\'t have that song.
>> Correct
>> I\'m sorry, I can\'t think of a song that could describe my life.
But, I have one book that my thinking was extended about religion,life and death.
>> However, there is a book that expanded my views about religion, life, and death.
The book is \"Thanatonautes\" by Bernard Werber.
>> Correct
Of course, I read book translated into korean.
>> Of course I read the version that was translated into Korean.
If you have time, I recommend you to read that book has English version.
>> If you have time, I recommend the English version to you.
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