Homework.

2013-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Teacher! It's already friday! Let me introduce my family to you because it is the topic of Today's Homework regarding the family. We are four members in my family-my two daughters, my wife and I. And I have my mother and my younger brother who live in another city which is called "Busan". My father passed away when I was 20 years old and My parents-in-law also passed away before about 10 years. My brother married about 7 years ago. There are 3 members in his family-his son, his wife and he. We used to meet at Busan twice a year. Thanks, Best Regards, [이름] HOMEWORK- 1.aunt 2.brother-in-law 3.maternal grandmother-in-law 4.niece 5.grandson. 6.brother 7.maternal uncle-in-law 8.cousin 9.nephew 10.maternal grandfather-in-law

강사 첨삭

Hi!

I think that you look forward to spend your Friday!

Do you have a special plan? Well, take this time to unwind!

However, there are some points which you may kindly review like word capitalizations and punctuation marks.

I also added some methods to rephrase the patterns you usually construct.

I hope this will help you broaden your knowledge about how flexible the English language is.^^

May you have a great weekend!^^

^^

Hello Teacher!

>>You can also insert a comma like: Hello, Teacher!
It\'s already friday!

>>It\'s already Friday!

>>Note: Don\'t forget to capitalize words such as days, holidays, names of people and places, etc.
Let me introduce my family to you because it is the topic of Today\'s Homework regarding the family.

>> I will  introduce my family to you because it is the topic of today\'s homework.

We are four members in my family-my two daughters, my wife and I.
>>OR:We have four members in the family-my two daughters, my wife and I.

>> OR:We are four in the family- my two daughters, my wife, and I.

>>OR:Our family consists of four-my two daughters, my wife, and I.
And I have my mother and my younger brother who live in another city which is called \"Busan\".

>>In addition,my mother and younger brother live in another city which is called \"Busan\".
My father passed away when I was 20 years old and My parents-in-law also passed away before about 10 years.

>>My father passed away when I was 20 years old and my parents-in-law also died about 10 years ago.

My brother married about 7 years ago.

>>My brother got married about 7 years ago.

>>My brother has been married for almost 7 years.
>>There are 3 members in his family-his son, his wife and he.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: His family has 3 members- his son, his wife and he.

We used to meet at Busan twice a year.
>>We meet in Busan twice a year.

>>We gather in Busan biannually.

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