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2013-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? It's grateful imagination to be an employer. I think that selection of employee is case by case. In case of [이름]ple labor jobs, I prefer to hire an inexperienced worker at a lower salary because it doesn't need deep knowledge such as carrying and packing. But if I need employees who is technician or engineer, I prefer to hire experienced workers. Because their experiences might be solid foundation of my company. I don't know the period I can collect my right money. But I believe power of experiences.

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T. Giselle

If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary?
>> Correct
It\'s grateful imagination to be an employer.

>> It\'s great to imagine being an employer. 

I think that selection of employee is case by case.

>> I think selection of employees is case by case. 

In case of [이름]ple labor jobs, I prefer to hire an inexperienced worker at a lower salary because it doesn\'t need deep knowledge such as carrying and packing.
>> In case of [이름]ple jobs like carrying and packing, I prefer to hire an inexperienced worker at a lower salary because the job doesn\'t require special skills or knowledge. 

But if I need employees who is technician or engineer, I prefer to hire experienced workers. Because their experiences might be solid foundation of my company.

>> However, if I need technicians or engineers, I prefer to hire experienced workers because their experiences might be a solid foundation of my company.

I don\'t know the period I can collect my right money.

>> I don\'t know how long I can earn some profit. 

But I believe power of experiences.

>> But I believe the power of experiences.

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