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2013-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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What are some indicators that would show that a country's economy is getting better? today's homework is very difficult issue. I think that korea's economy doesn't get better for few years. because stock was below 2000 point since last year. and my salary raised a little less than rate of inflation.

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Hi there, An EXCITING FRIDAY to you! You did a good job in answering your homework. Well, I think Korea is starting to stand up nowadays specially in the entertainment industry.^^ Today is Friday and I know that you are happy about that.^^ I\'m looking forward to our next class.^^ Take care and always be happy! Have a great day ahead of you!         (^^,)(^^,)(^^,) ~T.Chelsea~kkk   What are some indicators that would show that a country\'s economy is getting better?today\'s homework is very difficult issue. >>Today\'s homework is very a difficult issue.I think that korea\'s economy doesn\'t get better for few years. >>I think, Korea\'s economy is not getting better for the past few years.because stock was below 2000 point since last year. >>...because the stock decreased up to 2000 points/percent since last year. and my salary raised a little less than rate of inflation. >>My salary raised less than the rate of inflation.

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