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ESSAY: Are today's children and young teens overly concerned with their physical appearance? Compose an essay in which you develop your point of view on this topic. Sure~ of course. In Korea, the view, that today's children and young teens overly concerned with their physical appearance is common. expecially, After graduating high school many young teens are changed. until they were high school student they have to concentrate on studying to pass scholastic ability test. so their looks are plain. but becoming freshmen in university, they try to make up their face and to look fancy and nice. I also do it. during the day I wear contact lenses. and make up my face. maybe.. If Maria see me in daytime, she would be surprised at my look. at night I don't want to pay attention to my face. kkk but the reason that I am plain in night is not like that I don't like Maria. Don't get me wrong >< see you soon later~!!

Hi there^^,      Good evening, wow!!! What a good composition. As they say, looks can be deceiving. What is important is for us to stay true to ourselves and do the right thing. You are a beautiful lady Miss [이름], keep on smiling. See you later.^^ ~T.Maria~   ESSAY: Are today\'s children and young teens overly concerned with their physical appearance? Compose an essay in which you develop your point of view on this topic.Sure~ of course. >> CorrectIn Korea, the view, that today\'s children and young teens overly concerned with their physical appearance is common. >> Correct                                                 >> young teens are overly concerned.... expecially, After graduating high school many young teens are changed. >> Most especially, after graduating high school many young teens change.  until they were high school student they have to concentrate on studying to pass scholastic ability test. >> Until they finish high school, students have to concentrate on studying to pass the scholastic ability test. so their looks are plain. >> So their looks are plain. >> Correct but becoming freshmen in university, they try to make up their face and to look fancy and nice. >> Once they become a freshman in the university, they try to put make up to their faces to look fancy and nice.I also do it. during the day I wear contact lenses. and make up my face. maybe.. >> I also do it, during the day I wear contact lenses and put make up on my face. If Maria see me in daytime, she would be surprised at my look. >>If Maria sees....          >> Correct at night I don\'t want to pay attention to my face. >> At night, I don\'t want to pay attention to my looks. kkk but the reason that I am plain in night is not like that I don\'t like Maria. >> Correct                                  >>at Don\'t get me wrong >< see you soon later~!! >> Correct