Homework

Q. When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. A. I totally agree with the quotation above. I believe that luck is always given to a person that always doing his best and preparing his business. In other words, luck means having a chance because of hard work and preparation perfectly. I've realized that is true through reading a lot of books regarding self-development or biography of many great people.

Hello there!

How was your weekend?

I hope it was a great one.

I also hope you spent it well with your friends and family.

Anyways, thanks for sending me your opinion.^^

The way you expressed your opinion was magnum opus. However, there were minimal corrections like verb tenses.

When you use two or more verbs in one sentence,please do not get confused.

Let\'s see:

I totally agree with the quotation above.

>>CORRECT!

>> I totally agree with the aforementioned quotation.

I believe that luck is always given to a person that always doing his best and preparing his business.

>>I believe that luck is always given to a person who never fails to do his best and prepares his business.

>>OR:I believe that luck always happens to a person who constantly gives his best and prepares his business.
In other words, luck means having a chance because of hard work and preparation perfectly.

>>In other words, luck means having a chance because of hard work and preparing perfectly.

>>In other words, luck means having a break because of hard work and perfect preparation.

>>OR: Therefore, luck means acing something resulting from hard work and perfect preparation.

 I\'ve realized that is true through reading a lot of books regarding self-development or biography of many great people.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I\'ve realized that it is true through reading a myriad of books on how to develop ourselves or some biographies of many great people.