Homework
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Who was the most influential person in your life? How did this person make you want to become better? Atleast 5 sentences.
-Several managers have had a influence on me.
>>Several managers had an influence on me.
Since I joined at my company in 2008.
>>Correct!
I have met 3 managers as my direct boss.
>>Correct!
OR>>I met 3 managers as my direct bosses.
My current manager is the most influential person to me.
>>Correct!
Because I have learned a lot of things which are communication skill and something regarding to presentation.
>>Because I\'ve learned a lot of things which are proper communicating skills and good presentations.
and He is very strict himself.
>>And he is very strict.
He always arrives at my company at 7:30.
>>Correct!
So I awalys try to arrive at my company before ha comes.
>>Correct! [always]
Due to good boss, I am becoming a diligent person!
>>And because of having a good boos like him, I became a diligent person.
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