homework
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If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?Use specific reason and details to support your answer.
If I could change one thing in the world,it is an English as a global language.
I will change a global language from English to Korean.
people who is in the world, they will learn Korean to comunicate with other country people.
Im my case, I don't need to study English any more because I am a native speaker :)
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Wow! Nice composition today.
Hahahah. Yep it would be beneficial for you and it would be hard for me in the other hand.
Good job in expressing your ideas.
Keep it up!
See you again tomorrow.^^
T.Chelsea
If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?Use specific reason and details to support your answer.
>> Correct^^If I could change one thing in the world,it is an English as a global language.
>> If I could change one thing in the world, I would not make English as a global language.
I will change a global language from English to Korean.
>> I will change the global language from English to Korean.
people who is in the world, they will learn Korean to comunicate with other country people.
people who is in the world, they will learn Korean to comunicate with other country people.
>> People will learn Korean and use it as a mode of communication.
Im my case, I don\'t need to study English any more because I am a native speaker :)
Im my case, I don\'t need to study English any more because I am a native speaker :)
>> In my case, I don\'t need to study English anymore because I am a native speaker. :)
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