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2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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Imagine you have a bf, what would you do if you'd go on a date? -> I would like to take a walk along the park with him holding his hands by chatting some subjects to know his personality and likes and dislikes. Also I want to go some restaurant and amusement park >.<~

강사 첨삭

Hi there ^-^ That\'s cool and very sweet! Hmm, I wanna try that as well. Thanks for sharing, I really like your answer. See you in class. :) Teacher Kristel      Imagine you have a bf, what would you do if you\'d go on a date?-> I would like to take a walk along the park with him holding his hands by chatting some subjects to know his personality and likes and dislikes. Also I want to go some restaurant and amusement park >.<~ >> I would like to take a walk along the park with him holding hands together and chat about some topics to know his personality, likes and dislikes. Also, I want to go to some restaurant and amusement park with him.      

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