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2013-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Q) If you received lottery tickets as a gift at the office party, and you won $30,000.00, would you share the winnings with the person that gave you the gift? A) Of course I will separate the money. But I won't separate half exactly in case of $30,000,000. I will send a house and a car to the person that gave me lottery ticket. If he wants to receive lots of money again, I will hire efficient lawyers using the money. Then, I will recover the house and the car. Actually, in this case, I sure to win the trial according case law in Korea.

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Hi there!You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.I might have mentioned this before but I would like to say this again.^^Thank you so much for sending this in!Keep on writing! T.ChelseaQ)If you received lottery tickets as a gift at the office party, and you won $30,000.00, would you share the winnings with the person that gave you the gift?A)Of course I will separate the money. >>Of course, I will divide the money into.. [half and so on..]^^But I won\'t separate half exactly in case of $30,000,000. >>But I won\'t divide it into half in the case of $30,000,000.I will send a house and a car to the person that gave me lottery ticket. >>I will buy a house and a car for the person who gave me the lottery ticket.If he wants to receive lots of money again, I will hire efficient lawyers using the money. >>Correct!Then, I will recover the house and the car. >>Correct!Actually, in this case, I sure to win the trial according case law in Korea. >>Actually, in this case, I will surely win the trial with the law that we have in Korea.

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