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2013-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. Nothing is more important than growing your customer or ____________ base. client other example sentence : If we settled a renewed computer process, we would extend our client base. 2. What is another way of saying "to make more money"? to increase revenue -To increase revenue in our company, we should launch more professional promotion. 3. What does it mean to "close" a sale? to finalize a sale 4. What do you call people who you can potentially sell to? leaders : We will follow our leaders instruction who has many related experience over years. 5. What's the term that describes the initial search for new sales leads? sales searching The reason why A company accomplished a severalfold increase in sales is their detailed sales searching.

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Hi there, Jo! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing this. You are really a diligent girl! Keep it up! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ 1. Nothing is more important than growing your customer or ____________ base.client >> Correct other example sentence : If we settled a renewed computer process, we would extend our client base.>> Correct 2. What is another way of saying \"to make more money\"?to increase revenue>> Correct -To increase revenue in our company, we should launch more professional promotion.>> To increase revenue in our company, we should launch more professional promotions.3. What does it mean to \"close\" a sale?to finalize a sale>> Correct 4. What do you call people who you can potentially sell to? leaders>> The correct answer is LEADS. : We will follow our leaders instruction who has many related experience over years.>> We will follow our leader\'s instruction who has many related experiences over years.5. What\'s the term that describes the initial search for new sales leads? sales searching>> The correct answer is SALES PROSPECTING.The reason why A company accomplished a severalfold increase in sales is their detailed sales searching. >>  The reason why A Company accomplished a severalfold increase in sales is their detailed sales prospecting.  

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