homework
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Q) If you could eat only one food for the rest of your life what food would you choose and why?
A) I will choose a hamburger. Because Hamburger is consist of meat, vegetable, some sauce and bread.
I can separate the hanburger to meat, vegetable and bread like eating steak to use a knife and a fork.
But,eating hamburger during the rest of my life must be a boring.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^,
Thank you for doing your homework as always!
Hahaha! Yeah I totally agree with you! Eating hamburger for the rest of your life will be boring.
You really did a great job in your composition today!
I\'m really happy!
I made some corrections, try to review it if you have time.
Have a great day and take care!
~T.Chelsea
Q) If you could eat only one food for the rest of your life what food would you choose and why?A)
I will choose a hamburger.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I will choose hamburger.
Because Hamburger is consist of meat, vegetable, some sauce and bread.
>>CORRECT!I can separate the hanburger to meat, vegetable and bread like eating steak to use a knife and a fork.
>>I can separate the bread from the meat and vegetable. It\'s like eating a steak using a knife and a fork.But,eating hamburger during the rest of my life must be a boring.
>>But eating hamburger for the rest of my life must be boring.
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