homework:)
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Charles, the superstar! I can imagine that happening! I truly can! :)
Thank you for sharing this amazing essay!
I enjoyed every detail.
See ya later. :)
Cheers,
T.Risa
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
I sometimes dream of becoming a film celebrity.
>> I sometimes dream of becoming a film actor.
>> When I was young, I wanted to be an actor.
In the movie, I can be a young CEO of the major company or I can be a fight pilot.
>> In the movies, I can be a young CEO of a big company or a pilot.
I can make a lot of money, I can help the weak person, I can defend the country.
>> I can earn a lot of money, I can help the weak, I can defend the country.
Of course, I can make many friends who are famous actors and actress.
>> Of course, I can befriend famous actors and actresses.
Wow!
>> Correct
Imagine these things, that make me happy and will be a good experience to me.
>> Imagining these things makes me happy and is a good experience for me.
If I am a film celebrity, I would go abroad. \"Hollywood\"
>> If I were a celebrity, I would go to Hollywood.
First of all, I will make My hand printing there.
>> I would have my name printed on the Hollywood Walk of Fame.
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