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2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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I'm so sorry about today's class. Because I overslept, so I couldn't answer your call. I'm very sorry about that.I'll never do this behavior. These are my homework and my own answer in our class book. If I could speak English fluently, I would like to travel all around the world. English is the most well-known language in the world. So it helps my travel more conveniently. And I can communicate with foreign people more easily. To speak English fluently is to know the world more easily I think. 3 qualifications to become a flight attendant. Being a successful ground staff require an applicant to have precision, flexibility and sociable personality. They should be able to check the all about passenger's routing, making no mistake. Also ground staffs should be able to successfully handle various situations including some unexpected ones. Most importantly, ground staffs need to provide comfortable service to all the customers in the airport with comfortable and friendly atmosphere.

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Hi there^^, Thank you for sending your homework and your answer for our topic today. I really appreciate you sending me a message, telling me the reason why you weren\'t able to answer my calls. You really did a great job in your homework and your answer in our book! Keep it up! I made some correction, please find time to review the corrections I made. See you tomorrow then! Have a great day and take care! ~T.Chelsea~ I\'m so sorry about today\'s class. >>CORRECT! Because I overslept, so I couldn\'t answer your call. >>CORRECT! I\'m very sorry about that. >>CORRECT! I\'ll never do this behavior. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I will never do this kind of behavior again.These are my homework and my own answer in our class book. >>CORRECT!If I could speak English fluently, I would like to travel all around the world. >>CORRECT! English is the most well-known language in the world. >>CORRECT! So it helps my travel more conveniently. >>CORRECT! >>So, It will help my travel more conveniently. And I can communicate with foreign people more easily. >>CORRECT!  To speak English fluently is to know the world more easily I think. >>Do you mean \"I think, to be able to speak in English fluently is to know the is to the word.\"3 qualifications to become a flight attendant. >>The three qualifications in becoming a flight attendant.Being a successful ground staff require an applicant to have precision, flexibility and sociable personality. >>Being a successful ground staff requires an applicants to have precision, flexibility and sociable personality. They should be able to check the all about passenger\'s routing, making no mistake. >>They should be able to check all the passenger\'s routing with no mistakes. Also ground staffs should be able to successfully handle various situations including some unexpected ones. >>CORRECT! Most importantly, ground staffs need to provide comfortable service to all the customers in the airport with comfortable and friendly atmosphere. >>CORRECT!

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