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2013-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Q) What would you do if you could suddenly speak English fluently? A) I had just once experince in my dreams. I was a native speaker in my dreams although I could not remember what I said. At that time, I worked with a foreign boss who is "Linda" from America. I got a stresse by her because I could not speak English well and I could not talk to her well although she was a very kind person. If I could speak English well, I want to change a working place where is America, Spain and Germany.Our company has a lot of bench in many country. and I want to watch a american movie and TV series without Korean subtitle.

강사 첨삭

Wonderful dream!

With enough determination, you will achieve that fluency in English. 

Thank you for sharing your answer. :)

See you in class, 

T.Chelsea


Q)

What would you do if you could suddenly speak English fluently?

A)

I had just once experince in my dreams.

>> I once experienced that in a dream.

I was a native speaker in my dreams although I could not remember what I said.

>> I was a native speaker but I can not remember what I said.

At that time, I worked with a foreign boss who is \"Linda\" from America.

>> In my dream, I worked with a foreign boss name Linda from the United States.

I got a stresse by her because I could not speak English well and I could not talk to her well although she was a very kind person.

>> I was stressed because I could not speak English well and talk to her well even if she was a very kind person.


If I could speak English well, I want to change a working place where is America, Spain and Germany.

>> If I cold speak English well, I want to work in the United States, Spain and Germany.

Our company has a lot of bench in many country.

>> Our company would have branches in many countries.

and I want to watch a american movie and TV series without Korean subtitle.

>> Also, I want to watch American movies and TV series without Korean subtitles.

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