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Essay : What can say about this topic??
Making a bad decision is better than making no decision . Do you agree or agree not?? why or why not???
I agree.
Most people likely to think something only in one way. but I want to claim that sometimes we should think something~ in other way. because. there is saying : The best opportunities can be found in times of crisis.
So although you have bad decision, the decisions can be turned into opportunities. or you can have the specual chance that you can experience . And If you have big bad failure, the failure can be foundation of success. Faliure is wonderful teacher~!! I think that If you have no decision, later you can regret your decision.
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Hi there!!!
Wow are you already at home? I wanted to hear about what happened to your day today.
Your composition is awesome. I have to agree with you. We also have to think the other way.
Or we may say, we need to think about other points of view.
I think point of view is another term of saying one way. See you later. Take care.
~T.Maria~
Essay : What can say about this topic?? Making a bad decision is better than making no decision . Do you agree or agree not?? why or why not???I agree.
>> CorrectMost people likely to think something only in one way.
>> Most people like to think about something in just one way.
>> Most people like to think about something is just one point of view.
but I want to claim that sometimes we should think something~ in other way.
>> But I want to claim that sometimes we should think about other points of view
because. there is saying : The best opportunities can be found in times of crisis.
>> because there is a saying: The best opportunities can be found in times of crisis.
So although you have bad decision, the decisions can be turned into opportunities.
>> So even if you had bad decisions, those decisions can be turned into opportunities.
or you can have the specual chance that you can experience .
>> Or you can have the special chance to experiece those things.
And If you have big bad failure, the failure can be foundation of success.
>> And if you had a terrible failure, you can make that failure your foundation to become successful.
>> ( instead of using the adjectives big and bad you may use terrible to indicate that the failure is big and bad)
Faliure is wonderful teacher~!!
>> Correct or Sometimes, failure is also wonderful teacher!
>> spelling : Failure
I think that If you have no decision, later you can regret your decision.
>> I think that if you make no decision, you may soon regret having no decision at all.
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