homework:)

2013-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Risa

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY : What do clothes tell people about our personalities? People has different personality so they try on different clothes. Active persons usually put on comfortable clothes. For example, they try on blue jean, training suit, working clothes. Quiet persons usually put on long dress, formal dress, like that. But this is not always right.

강사 첨삭

Sir Charles, thank you for sending your answer. :)

There are a lot of ways we can determine the personality of a person.

Nonverbal cues for one. 

But  I agree that these may not always be accurate. :)


Cheers,

T.Risa


HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY : What do clothes tell people about our personalities?



People has different personality so they try on different clothes.
>> People have different personalities so they try on different clothes.
Active persons usually put on comfortable clothes.

>> Active people usually put on comfortable clothes. 

>> People with active lifestyle put on comfortable clothes.

For example, they try on blue jean, training suit, working clothes.
>> For example, they out on blue jeans, training and working clothes.
Quiet persons usually put on long dress, formal dress, like that.

>> Quiet people usually wear long dresses, formal dresses and the like.

>> People who are timid wear long dresses, formal dresses and the like.

But this is not always right.

>> But impressions from what people are wearing may not always be right. 

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