Homework

2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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1.___ Thanksgiving, we usually eat cranberry sauce with our roasted turkey. On In -> ON 2.They were reassured ___ the outcome ___ the elections. about, in by, of -> about, of 3.We always take a trip ___ the summer. on in -> in 4.She made the mistake ___ adding salt instead of sugar. about of -> of 5.He was sitting ___ his seat when the teacher enter;ed the classroom. at in -> in I sometimes go to a cafe alone. I read books or listen to musics or see movies on notebook with coffee in the cafe. The aroma of coffee is so good. In Korea, There are so many kind of Coffee shops. There are seven frnachise cafes nearby my home. I usually go to Starbucks nearby my home on weekends. I like to drink Soy milk latte at Starbucks. Almost every day, there are so many people at Starbucks. There are people that come alone like me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there,

Thank you very much for sending in your homework.

You did great!^^

Continue sharing great ideas and lovely thoughts.

Have a great day ahead of you.^^

See you in my class!

T. Chloe^^

1.___ Thanksgiving, we usually eat cranberry sauce with 

our roasted turkey.
On
In

 -> ON

>>correct

2.They were reassured ___ the outcome ___ the elections.
about, in
by, of

-> about, of

>> by, of 

3.We always take a trip ___ the summer.
on
in

-> in

  >>correct

4.She made the mistake ___ adding salt instead of sugar.
about
of

-> of

>>correct

5.He was sitting ___ his seat when the teacher enter;ed the
classroom.
at
in

-> in

>>correct

I sometimes go to a cafe alone. 

>>correct

>>Sometimes, I go to the cafe alone.

I read books or listen to musics or see movies on notebook with coffee in the cafe.

>>I read books, listen to music or watch a movie on my notebook while having coffee inside the coffee shop.

The aroma of coffee is so good.

>>The aroma of the coffee is so good.

 In Korea, There are so many kind of Coffee shops.

>>There are so many kinds of coffee shops in Korea.

There are seven frnachise cafes nearby my home.

>>There are about seven franchise cafes near my home.

I usually go to Starbucks nearby my home on weekends.

>>correct

I like to drink Soy milk latte at Starbucks.

>>correct

Almost every day, there are so many people at Starbucks.

>>correct

There are people that come alone like me.

>>There are people, who go there alone like me.

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