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2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. ________ the teacher explain this properly? Did 2. ________ the professor angry? Was 3. ________ you spoken to him before he called you? Had 4. If you ________ told me, I would have never found out. hadn't 5. ________ they seeing each other? Were : I write in my diary nearly three times in a week. I'd like to write down my feeling and everyday affairs. If I'm in a sad mood, I tend to write so emotionally. And sometimes it could work positively putting my sad in the text. eventually, I can rearrange my memories. Besides, whenever I read a book that has good sentences, I note good passages down from the book. So I'll keep writing my diary now and for ever.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jo! Thank you for your composition today! Writing is a very good hobby. It can help you express your emotions. It can also enhance your skill in organizing your ideas. I\'m glad to know that you are keeping a diary. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ 1. ________ the teacher explain this properly?Did>> Correct 2. ________ the professor angry?Was>> Correct 3. ________ you spoken to him before he called you?Had>> Correct 4. If you ________ told me, I would have never found out.hadn\'t>> Correct 5. ________ they seeing each other?Were>> Correct : I write in my diary nearly three times in a week. >> Correct I\'d like to write down my feeling and everyday affairs. >> Correct If I\'m in a sad mood, I tend to write so emotionally. >> Correct And sometimes it could work positively putting my sad in the text.>> Sometimes, writing some sad notes work positively for me. Eventually, I can rearrange my memories. >> Correct Besides, whenever I read a book that has good sentences, I note good passages down from the book. >> Besides, whenever I read a book that has good sentences, I take notes of the good passages. So I\'ll keep writing my diary now and forever. >> Correct

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