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2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1.was 2.were 3.Was 4.was 5.were,was 6.was 7.was,were 8.were 9.was,was,was 10.was,was Yesterday,I played at the beach. I had fun at the beach with my friends. I like the ocean. Which do you like mountain or the ocean?

강사 첨삭

Hello, there! Oh, thank you for perfecting your homework! It was awesome! Tom! I was so glad you had fun at the beach^^ You must really love the ocean.. I am so envious T^T I am so afraid of jellyfish.. I am so horrified they might sting me.. Then I\'ll die o.O kkkk By the way, I like the mountain more than the ocean^^ I love being on top of the mountain and stare blankly at the majestic view in front of me. I also like the ocean, but sometimes I am terrified by sea snakes, jellyfish and some scary sea creatures T^T Yeah, sometimes I surf ^^ I am not a good surfer, though T^T Now let\'s see: Yesterday,I played at the beach. >>CORRECT! >>OR: Yesterday, I frolicked at the beach.I had fun at the beach with my friends. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I had a great time there with my friends.I like the ocean. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I am amused by the ocean. Which do you like mountain or the ocean? >>Which do you like more, the mountain or the ocean? 1.was>>CORRECT! 2.were >>CORRECT! >>OR: You can also use its negative form, \"were not\".3.Was >>CORRECT!4.was >>CORRECT!5.were,was >>CORRECT! 6.was >>CORRECT! 7.was,were>>CORRECT! 8.were>>CORRECT! >>We can also use the be verb \"were\" if we are rederring to a plural subject 9.was,was,was >>CORRECT!10.was,was >>CORRECT!

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