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2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Q. How do you see yourself 5 years from now. Use adjective and make at least 5 sentences. A. I'll be married around 2 years later. So, I'll be more responsible than now. I'll be more intelligent than now since I'll do some works harder than now. The technology will be more complicated than these days. Therefore I'll be smarter by learning the newest techniques. -Diary- I've had a dinner and drunk with my co-workers after work. Basically, I don't like to drink a lot after work. Because I have to stand and work under the influence during at leat the next morning. It's a sort of hard work for me. However, sometimes I'd like to have a dinner and drink with my co-workers or friends. We can talk to each other a lot regarding a job or task. It makes me feel so good and release some of stress.

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Hello there! Thank you so much for spending some time making your homework. It gives me a proud feeling knowing that you are really willing to learn. By the way, here are the corrections that I had made. You can check on them and you can use them to improve your grammar. Always be happy and see you in our class.^^-   Q. How do you see yourself 5 years from now. Use adjective and make at least 5 sentences.A. I\'ll be married around 2 years later. >> I\'ll be married two years from now. >>OR: I see myself as a happily married person two years from now.So, I\'ll be more responsible than now. >> I am more responsible by then. I\'ll be more intelligent than now since I\'ll do some works harder than now. >> I can also see myself becoming more knowledgeable due to the experiences from work that I have encountered.The technology will be more complicated than these days. >> CorrectTherefore I\'ll be smarter by learning the newest techniques.>> Therefore, I\'ll be smarter by learning the newest techniques.-Diary-I\'ve had a dinner and drunk with my co-workers after work. >> I had dinner and some drinks with my co-workers after our work.Basically, I don\'t like to drink a lot after work. >> CorrectBecause I have to stand and work under the influence during at leat the next morning. >> It is because I don\'t want to work when I have a hangover. It\'s a sort of hard work for me. >>It is really hard for me to work.However, sometimes I\'d like to have a dinner and drink with my co-workers or friends. >> However, sometimes I like having dinner and a couple of drinks with my co-workers or friends.We can talk to each other a lot regarding a job or task. >> I like the fact that we can spend sometime talking to each other regarding a job or a task.It makes me feel so good and release some of stress. >> It makes me feel so good and free from stress. >> OR: It makes me feel so good and relaxed.

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