homework
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1. I have a horse of my own. I call her Pretty Girl. She is an intelligent animal, but she is not a thoroughbred horse. I could never enter her in race, even if I wanted to. But I do not want to. She is a companion, for my own pleasure. I took her swimming day or two ago.
2. The Horse knows when he is going to race. How does he know? His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.) He does not have a saddle on his back. He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand. He is led under grandstand into unusual, special stall. The Horse is nervous. Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting gate flies open and track is before him. If he does not begin to run instantly, the other horses are already ahead of him. During race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him. Sometimes jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch. Eventually a horse gets to run as fast as he can. The Exercise boy, watching owner's favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing. Secretly, he is planning for day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross finish line.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
It is again Thursday and this means that we have one more day to go for the weekend.
Anyways, we just need to enjoy this day and tomorrow.^^
Going back to your homework.
Well done! But I do understand that it is sometimes confusing.
Try to check where I placed the articles in the paragraph and compare it with your answers.^^
Have a good one and I will see you later.
Always,
~Aimee^^
~Aimee^^
>> Correct
I call her Pretty Girl.
>> Correct
She is an intelligent animal, but she is not a thoroughbred horse.
>> Correct
I could never enter her in race, even if I wanted to.
>> I could never enter her in (A) race, even if I wanted to.
But I do not want to.
>> Correct
She is a companion, for my own pleasure.
>> Correct
I took her swimming day or two ago.
>> I took her swimming (A) day or two ago.
2. The Horse knows when he is going to race.
2. The Horse knows when he is going to race.
>> Correct
OR>> A horse knows when he is going to race.
How does he know?
>> Correct
His breakfast was scanty.
>> Correct
(He is angry about that.)
>> Correct
He does not have a saddle on his back.
>> Correct
He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand.
>> He is being led, not ridden, to (THE) grandstand.
He is led under grandstand into unusual, special stall.
>> He is led under (THE) grandstand into (AN) unusual, special stall.
The Horse is nervous.
>> Correct
Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting gate flies open and track is before him.
>> Sometimes he does not know what to do when (THE) starting gate flies open and (THE) track is before him.
If he does not begin to run instantly, the other horses are already ahead of him.
>> Correct
During race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him.
>> During (THE) race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him.
Sometimes jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch.
>> Sometimes (THE) jockey holds him back to save his energy for the last stretch.
Eventually a horse gets to run as fast as he can.
>> Eventually (THE) horse gets to run as fast as he can.
The Exercise boy, watching owner\'s favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.
>> (THE) exercise boy, watching (THE) owner\'s favorite jockey riding the horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.
Secretly, he is planning for day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross finish line.
>> Secretly, he is planning for (THE) day when he will be (A) jockey himself, and his horse will be (THE) first to cross (THE) finish line.
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