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I want to have a beautiful mansion near the beach. It will have a lot of fishtanks. It will have a big pool. I will make a lot of rooms. And I will make a big bathroom too. The mansion's color is gray.

Hello, there! Maybe I want to live in your mansion! When I picture it, I want to go there.. and it seems fantastic! Try to use more adjectives to make your composition more vivid >.< It will make it more colorful, too! Good luck and enjoy!! I want to have a beautiful mansion near the beach. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I want to have a wonderful mansion near the beach. It will have a lot of fishtanks. >>It will have a lot of fish tanks. >>OR: It will contain myriads of fish tanks. It will have a big pool. >>CORRECT! >>OR: Moreover, it will have an enormous pool. I will make a lot of rooms.>>CORRECT! >>OR: I will construct a lot of rooms. And I will make a big bathroom too.>> CORRECT! >>OR: In addition, I will make a wide lavatory. The mansion\'s color is gray. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I will paint the mansion gray.